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  • Started 8 months ago by BaalHabooze
  • Latest reply from Curiosity

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  1. BaalHabooze
    On the rocks

    tshuva tefilla 'n tzedaka
    removes a gezeira
    caused by avaira
    and promises for
    good days galore
    blessings and more
    just gotta get in the mood
    repent, dude,
    put down yo' food
    don't mean to be rude
    but this is your life
    as well as your wife's
    your possessions, your health
    your friends, your wealth
    it's too serious
    to be chillin', delirious
    its nothin' mysterious
    being judged 'n all
    from now till next fall
    it ain't petty nor small
    so don't stall
    from repenting today
    to mend your ways
    an' use your days
    wisely, it pays
    Be a good jew
    you know what to do
    return to your Father
    it's worth the bother
    He awaits His nation
    with anticipation
    extreme elation
    and jubilation
    let's make Him proud
    yo, sing aloud
    in a crowd
    only men allowed
    Heavenly Father we're here!
    w've shed a tear
    we never go back there
    we want to stay here

    ....WOW! Whew,,that new booze stuff i drank is gooooood! ☻
    L'chaim yidden L'chaim!

    Posted 8 months ago #
  2. WIY
    Member

    Rap is the lowest form of music that is produced and sung by the lowest elements of society.
    Instead of rap write a poem or make a normal song. Frum people should not be rapping.

    Posted 8 months ago #
  3. The Goq™
    Founder, President, Vice President and CEO of the CR Welcome Wagon!

    BH that was insanely good really top notch thank you for sharing.

    Posted 8 months ago #
  4. Curiosity
    Not a cat person

    " let's make Him proud
    yo, sing aloud
    in a crowd
    only men allowed,
    "

    Lol!!!!

    Posted 8 months ago #
  5. MiddlePath
    Member

    Nice, BaalHabooze! I'm not into rap, but you definitely strung those lyrics together nicely.

    This is more of a poem than a rap, but it also has to do with repentance and Yom Kippur:

    Year after year, through toil and strife
    My deeds are weighed, it's a circle of life
    Fear imbues my mind as the day comes near
    What will be with me, I cannot bear
    Who will live, and who will die
    Who will laugh and who will cry
    All my sins I throw away
    I'm changing my ways, it's Judgement Day
    To whiten the black, to cure the disease
    Asking forgiveness, down on my knees
    My body trembles, I'm numb from fear
    Sound of repentance pounds in my ear
    Who will live, and who will die
    Who will laugh and who will cry
    All my sins, I throw away
    I'm changing my ways, it's Judgement Day

    Posted 8 months ago #
  6. BaalHabooze
    On the rocks

    WIY- I agreed 100% on everything you said!!
    Anyhow, I never actually DID sing it, just posted it. but YOU were singing it in your head...lol! all in good clean fun, that's all :)
    with all due respect,

    l'chaim!

    Posted 8 months ago #
  7. WIY
    Member

    BaalHabooze

    The rhyming and lyrics are very good. You have talent.

    Posted 8 months ago #
  8. Shopping613
    The Awarder, President, and founder of SUC (Single Username Certificates). Contact me to join.

    Why only MEN? Why cant the women sing in their own private crowd?

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    Posted 8 months ago #
  9. Curiosity
    Not a cat person

    Who said they can't? Don't be so uber-sensitive.

    Posted 8 months ago #

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