Comments on: NYS Police Arrest Four NYC Men for Criminal Trespass at Homowack Hotel – ‘Skver Shtetel’ http://www.theyeshivaworld.com/news/headlines-breaking-stories/287354/nys-police-arrest-four-nyc-men-for-criminal-trespass-at-homowack-hotel-skver-shtetel.html Fri, 24 Jul 2015 16:02:28 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.7.9 By: computerbubby http://www.theyeshivaworld.com/news/headlines-breaking-stories/287354/nys-police-arrest-four-nyc-men-for-criminal-trespass-at-homowack-hotel-skver-shtetel.html#comment-838857 Thu, 26 Feb 2015 20:22:42 +0000 http://www.theyeshivaworld.com/?p=287354#comment-838857 You both missed the following: the sentence should read “Please employ writers WHO….”

I’m a grammar teacher.

]]> By: Z Man http://www.theyeshivaworld.com/news/headlines-breaking-stories/287354/nys-police-arrest-four-nyc-men-for-criminal-trespass-at-homowack-hotel-skver-shtetel.html#comment-838765 Thu, 26 Feb 2015 18:05:46 +0000 http://www.theyeshivaworld.com/?p=287354#comment-838765 @englishlanguage

Your comment should read:

Please employ writers that can actually compose a sentence in the English language. Doesn’t anyone proofread your submissions?

Please note the two corrections: proofread is ONE word; a question mark (?) must end a question.

]]> By: englishlanguage http://www.theyeshivaworld.com/news/headlines-breaking-stories/287354/nys-police-arrest-four-nyc-men-for-criminal-trespass-at-homowack-hotel-skver-shtetel.html#comment-838712 Thu, 26 Feb 2015 16:24:05 +0000 http://www.theyeshivaworld.com/?p=287354#comment-838712 Please employ writers that can actually compose a sentence in the English language. Doesn’t anyone proof read your submissions.

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