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Every character attribute is meant to bring out the best in him/her. So, even if I’m wrong, there’s no need ti get insulted. (BTW, I may have not analyzed PAA correctly)
So I’m walking down the road and bump into Randomex, or more accurately, he bumped into me because he was dancing and I don’t know what. Or, if he’s a girl, she was just waving her emerald sword, and I said “Hi” and s/he said something pretty undecipherable, with a song to go along as well,
and as we’re shmoozing along comes the lamedvuvnik and CIJ. The latter says how nice it is we’re all here together and lamedvuvnik is in his own world, just garbling about whatever seems to enter his mind, indifferent to what every else is thinking.
And Little Froggie bounces in, livens things up a bit. And then we see PAA (who quickly stuffs a CD in his pocket, but too late. I already see it says oitzar hachochma.) and demands why everyone is standing around if we could sit down. And then things get heated very quickly, everyone weighing the cons and pros of standing. And as more guys come, the argument gets more and more heated and less and less followable and I’m ambivalent about joining the fascinating complexities in pointless arguments, versus the simple tranquility of the side conversations, so I do a little of both, or maybe a little of neither. And then suddenly, a voice makes us jump. We hadn’t noticed the figure behind the tree, but there he is, saying, “Hi. I’m alive.” and we all turn and see that it’s the mod. So we all wave back and say, “we’re alive, too,” and resume the conversations. Except for some people who continue talking with the mod, I have no idea what about (I mean, he is alive, no?)
and then………..<i>to be continued………………………………..by someone else…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………