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bygirl93
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@Bygirl, I thought you knew me so well- after all, you’re the *queen*… lol

@Brucklyn Jewess I *loved* your poems: I really related to the first one and the second one was really evoking (evocative?). Here’s another one I wrote in honor of the weather:

I do like the sun

Its glaring rays

Bringing all your troubles to light

There’s nowhere to hide

Under its harsh light

Everyone can see your face

Your eyes blink

Unable to tolerate

Its beating force

The rain is dreary

Everyone is upset

Not just you

No one is looking

They’re focused on themselves

They don’t see your pain

And as the rain

Rolls down your face

Your tears are concealed

Under the clouds

In the rain

No one can see you cry

Thanks!

M.