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am yisrael chai
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You’ve got so much talent in the writing arena

Hashem obviously gave you ???? and ????

This last poem of yours shows yearning and hope

With these ingredients you’ll be able to cope

You say that you’d like to start a clean slate

That’s what TSHUVA’s for, it’s never too late

That will undo what you say you have done

And become positives; negatives-you’ll have none 🙂

You know you can’t change the circumstances of your birth

But you surely can increase your feelings of self-worth

It’s hard to be self-critical 24/7

No wonder you think of moving on to heaven

Your avoda right now seems to be

Finding the good in yourself constantly

You wouldn’t want treif food be part of your digestion

Onaas dvorim is treif to your neshama and disposition

Waiting to hear you list the good in you you’ve found

Which should mitigate the times you beat yourself to the ground

With G-d’s help we’re confident you can surely do it

When you succeed be”H, we’ll all say “We just knew it!”