apushatayid- I agree with you. To me, her writing appears to be from an elementary school student. If she wrote a cover letter in the way she is writing here, she will never get a job. She maybe a genius, but she writes like she was never learnt the basics in English Composition. Once someone knows how to write properly they always write properly unless they want to fit in in with the uneducated (minorities).
Moderator This is corrective criticism. Most personnel department have software that weeds out resumes and cover letters with spelling and grammatical errors before forwarding them for consideration. Those with errors are discarded. She is going to spend thousand of dollars on education with no chance of getting a job. This is why many colleges have remedial courses especially in English and Math (because they never learnt it prior). You can’t rely on spell check to correct these types of errors errors.