smartcookie–
Last line suggestions:
“betzibur or davening solely”
alternate 1 – “in minyan” instead of “betzibur”
alternate 2 – “when you pray” instead of “davening”
(hope you don’t mind a suggestion – I’d change “every” to “each” on line 3, for balance.)
Bracha the great–
You’re doing great.
Here are a few words you can try to end your last line with:
honey
runny
sunny
bunny