Nice, BaalHabooze! I’m not into rap, but you definitely strung those lyrics together nicely.
This is more of a poem than a rap, but it also has to do with repentance and Yom Kippur:
Year after year, through toil and strife
My deeds are weighed, it’s a circle of life
Fear imbues my mind as the day comes near
What will be with me, I cannot bear
Who will live, and who will die
Who will laugh and who will cry
All my sins I throw away
I’m changing my ways, it’s Judgement Day
To whiten the black, to cure the disease
Asking forgiveness, down on my knees
My body trembles, I’m numb from fear
Sound of repentance pounds in my ear
Who will live, and who will die
Who will laugh and who will cry
All my sins, I throw away
I’m changing my ways, it’s Judgement Day