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October 31, 2013 9:08 pm at 9:08 pm
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awesome book. original setting and plot and skillfully written. I like when authors use “show me don’t tell me”. you don’t have to give out every detail of character in a paragraph. you learn about the character through the story. whenever I see a book that starts off with something along the lines of:
“Chava was a beautiful girl with blue eyes and chocolate brown hair. She was smart and had many friends……”
I will immediately put it down. that’s not called skillful writing.