ZD,
You said you read English seforim. Which you are now comparing to Dickens.
1) The English seforim are well edited and clearly understandable. The subject matter just may be well out of your reach.
2) How can you compare seforim to literature?
3) Your comment was about grammar and proper English, now you’ve changed your tune.
4) You select stories written by the most famous authors and want to compare them to translations of books written in another language?
5) Why don’t you compare the Seforim to some of the technical pamphlets. Would be more comparable because it’s not just popular reading and then come back and compare.
6) The writers and editors of the seforim do an excellent job and write a lot better than most of the stuff you try to read. Even those writers at ArtScroll who have not gone to college.
Just ludicrous.