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haifagirl
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Okay Bemused and everyone else who has no problem with grammar. Please explain the following:

anne jupiter do you remember me i shreaked i couldnt believe it.

Is it:

1) “Anne Jupiter, do you remember me?” I shrieked.

I couldn’t believe it.

2) Anne Jupiter!

“Do you remember me?”

I shrieked.

I couldn’t believe it.

3) “Anne Jupiter, do you remember me?”

I shrieked, “I couldn’t believe it.”

4) “Anne Jupiter!”

“Do you remember me?”

I shrieked. I couldn’t believe it.

Each of those four paragraphs means something different. Yet, with no punctuation, I have no idea which one she meant. Or even if it was something totally different?

If you understand which one she meant, that’s great. I am obviously not as smart as you are, and need things to be written clearly.