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Okay Bemused and everyone else who has no problem with grammar. Please explain the following:
anne jupiter do you remember me i shreaked i couldnt believe it.
Is it:
1) “Anne Jupiter, do you remember me?” I shrieked.
I couldn’t believe it.
2) Anne Jupiter!
“Do you remember me?”
I shrieked.
I couldn’t believe it.
3) “Anne Jupiter, do you remember me?”
I shrieked, “I couldn’t believe it.”
4) “Anne Jupiter!”
“Do you remember me?”
I shrieked. I couldn’t believe it.
Each of those four paragraphs means something different. Yet, with no punctuation, I have no idea which one she meant. Or even if it was something totally different?
If you understand which one she meant, that’s great. I am obviously not as smart as you are, and need things to be written clearly.