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haifagirl
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I’m sorry, but I have to say this.

Good chinuch includes teaching good communication skills. “Good communication skills” means being able to write clearly so that people can understand what you are trying to say. If you are not a native English-speaker, it’s understandable. If you are, that message is unforgivable.

1) “I” is ALWAYS capitalized.

2) “Don’t” has an apostrophe.

3) “[D]on’t allow their kids drive” makes no sense. Try, “don’t allow their kids TO drive.” And besides, you mean “ride,” not “drive.”

4) “Are” is NOT spelled “r.”

5) Double question marks just look ignorant.

6) “A lot” is not one word.

7) “ehind his parents’ backs” requires an apostrophe and more than one back. (Unless his parents are conjoined twins. Not too likely.)

8) Your “sentence” beginning “alot” (sic) is really two sentences. And neither of them are questions. Why the question marks?

9) “What’s” does not have a “j,” but does have an apostrophe.

10) “Your” is NOT spelled “ur.”

11) That last sentence is a question. Why no question mark? Did you run out?

Eleven errors in a message that takes fewer than four lines. Are you trying to set a record?