I read non-fiction (especially History and Biography)
I am no writer and my writing skills are poor, but I can tell you the jewish books are terrible.
There are rules to writing English. Grammar , paragraph delopement, Story development etc . You might not like the rules when you are writing, but when you are reading a book, its important for these rules to be followed or else the book becomes unreadable.
It seems these jewish books dont follow those rules.
The Jewish book companies need to hire more proofreaders and copy editors to make sure these rules are kept