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May 23, 2013 9:58 pm at 9:58 pm #609409BronyParticipant
do people actually get their news from here? i just tried reading one story, and i couldn’t make it past the second paragraph. just to make sure it wasn’t an aberration, i clicked on the next story. same deal.
Hikind Prepares Loyalist To Challenge Councilman Greenfield In September
“Declining to respond in person, Assemblyman Dov Hikind issued a statement on his personal blog, not too much of a picked up blog to start off with, denying his involvement in pushing Chaim Israel, his loyalist, to run for City Council in the 44th district.”
lol what are these? sentences? not to those of us who speak english, that’s for sure. the upside? if i ever teach second graders, i can always print these to use as exercises.
smh…
May 23, 2013 10:29 pm at 10:29 pm #954517☕ DaasYochid ☕ParticipantAll of your incorrect lowercase letters are to compensate for their incorrect uppercase “A”?
May 23, 2013 10:42 pm at 10:42 pm #954518Oh Shreck!ParticipantOy, now the secret is out. Yes, it’s me. Just recently hired to the job. Problem is (they don’t know) I flunked in English…
May 23, 2013 11:33 pm at 11:33 pm #954519WIYMemberBrony
You are bothered by the English? Im much more bothered by the sinas chinam!
Absolutely disgusting. I guess YWN is soon to be the new and improved VIN.
May 24, 2013 4:18 am at 4:18 am #954520BronyParticipanti mean, i took it as a given that the substance itself would be poor. i’m just kind of surprised that a website would pay someone actual money to write like a fourth grader trying to blog for a school project (lol @ 5 years of “social media experience”). then again, when all you’re trying to do is hawk miles4cash scams i guess that’s all you need.
May 24, 2013 4:42 am at 4:42 am #954521☕ DaasYochid ☕ParticipantWhat bothers you about this?
May 24, 2013 5:50 am at 5:50 am #954522WIYMemberDY
They stated that he’s a chossid (for those who can’t tell from the picture! !!) Why the need to go into the detail of what he wears on his head on shabbos? Maybe they should also write if he eats galla or ptcha on Shabbos. Its irrelevant what he wears unless they are trying to be divisive by focusing on that point. I don’t want to get into this whole thing because its not a healthy topic. Just read the article and tell me if that line doesn’t stand out like a sore thumb. Its a statment of some sort and I don’t believe its an advertisement for streimels.
May 24, 2013 1:03 pm at 1:03 pm #954523Torah613TorahParticipantBrony, glad the semester’s almost over?
May 24, 2013 2:01 pm at 2:01 pm #954524BronyParticipantinstead of wasting my time explaining all that is wrong with the sentences, I’ll just correct them:
still sounds stupid and irrelevant, but it will have to do.
2. Declining to respond in person, Assemblyman Dov Hikind issued a statement on his lightly-trafficked personal blog. In the statement, Hikind denied pushing his loyalist, Chaim Israel, to run for City Council in the 44th district.
this one was tough to salvage because it was a horrible run-on.
ywn: call me maybe?
and 613: my high school is already finished
May 24, 2013 2:36 pm at 2:36 pm #954525🍫Syag LchochmaParticipantWow! I can’t believe how much criticism you guys have gotten away with. Posters have gotten battered for so much less.
May 24, 2013 3:53 pm at 3:53 pm #954527☕ DaasYochid ☕ParticipantIts a statment of some sort
It’s relevant to the story; it shows which demographic he’s trying to reach. I think you’re making something out of nothing.
May 24, 2013 4:10 pm at 4:10 pm #954528🍫Syag LchochmaParticipantand the game goes on . . .
(this is a continuation of a post that probably won’t go up)
May 24, 2013 4:28 pm at 4:28 pm #954529Oh Shreck!ParticipantSyag, Maybe the Moderation override switch was accidentally turned on..
May 24, 2013 5:47 pm at 5:47 pm #954531Torah613TorahParticipantbrony: if you’re not in upper ed I will eat my hat.
i wouldn’t be surprised if you were in the paid rather than the paying group either.
May 26, 2013 5:56 am at 5:56 am #954535resident of ds9MemberTorah: Why are you saying that?
May 27, 2013 5:54 am at 5:54 am #954536☕ DaasYochid ☕ParticipantAside from grammatical issues, the veracity of the whole story has been called into question.
May 27, 2013 12:10 pm at 12:10 pm #954537BronyParticipantyou mean to tell me that ywn would fabricate a story to drum up their new political “blog” (i use even that term loosely)? color me surprised.
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