I liked the Joke!!!! Is was meant to be in the spirit of Purim. No one actually belives Haman did not try to actually kill us.
That part wasn’t the problem. Just felt your point flowed better without it.
Maybe try one of the joke threads
P.S. I believe even Satmar and the Briskers use the Israeli health care system, so even they are mishtatef with the Zionist state.