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notasheep
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I know the original is Ivrit, that’s why I like it so much, she is such a good writer and the English translation is very well done, no pretentious language that even I need a dictionary to understand, which is what I always like.

So what did you think? My only gripe is that there is no mention of either Lady Makan or Hala expecting and then suddenly they both have babies. A bit too much of avoiding the topic – it is an adult novel after all. She could have written that they were expecting. Apart from that it was fantastic.