SaysMe – you’re writing is really expressive, so beautifully put and… sad. i’m sorry for your pain… betrayal is dreadful… you put it so well.
It’s a really nice vort you shared – thank you! I’ve heard the same idea of 0’s with yichus. Yichus is only of value if you’re the 1. Interesting this way 😉
How are you faring now?
Blabla, you express the pain of wishing to be free… how are you? And yes, it makes perfect sense!
You write about a little child’s pain, yes, it is real for them and it def. has to be acknowledged!!
You’re right – words are powerful. You put it nicely.
Just an interesting thought – those girls you passed by you say, “…I stared, was in awe,
their innocent, naivety,
that’s what I just saw.”
Yes, that’s just what you saw…. what is REALLY going on in their lives we just have no idea….
Puppy – you seem to be in a lot of pain. How are you feeling now? If the love is real, can you allow it to penetrate?
Thoughtful123 – That piece is really “thoughtful”!!! It’s really very good, i like it!! You have a nice style 😉
YW Moderator-42 – THAT’S A MASTERPIECE!! Thanks for sharing his poem.
Syag Lchochma, wherever you posted it, i’m glad you did!! It’s EXCELLENT!!! i understand your words. It’s a rebbe/teachers job to try to understand the child and teach him what HE can understand, and, mostly, impart skills and values 😉 thank you for sharing.