“Friend Bracha who goes by Bar”
What does that mean? That her nickname was is bar?
“She was from Jerusalem
Saw her on my bday”
I think that each word is supposed to connect to the word immediately preceding. So the word after “bar” should connect to “bar” and not to bracha, and the word after “Jerusalem” should connect to “Jerusalem” and not to Bracha.
Sorry to be so nitpicky, but aren’t you glad to know I’m reading your posts? 🙂