Ha ha ha – a girl from haifa has to correct my english!. Since becoming Chassidishe my English is as good – its true or maybe its mommy brain?.
Of course I have to. Nobody else seems to want to. And by the way, I’m a girl from Haifa (with a capital H) and I teach English (with a capital E).
Your English is as good as what?
“It’s” should have an apostrophe (in both places), and you don’t need a period after an exclamation point or a question mark.
besides for the nice view from the surgical table in the 4 star O.R where i recieved 1st class treatment and later recuperated , and that DEFINATELY was refreshing as i had many quiet hours to reflect and have hakirus hatoiv for all the brachas in my life, and feeling thankful that i am still amongst the living- being that i just went through GIVING BIRTH …. which is a life & DEATH situation.
You really should start your sentences with a capital letter. Also, “I” is always capitalized. “‘I’ before ‘e,’ except after ‘c’ . . .” Take a look at “received.”
Then again, “definitely” could definitely use some help, too.
that would all make for an interesting title to write an essay entitled “what I did on my summer vacation” for a class.
I’m not even going to try to tackle that sentence.
Have a great summer.