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March 4, 2012 2:20 am at 2:20 am #857544
soliek
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no the tense is correct. piece describes a scene…a dystopian, eerie, somewhat mysterious R platform. the writer is taking this all in, and is disconcerted, and finds the scene a bit disorientating. he gets on the wrong train.