Reply To: Popa Critiques Troll Posts

DaasYochid

a singular mind

Too late…

Thank you DY for contributing the first submission.

First I will talk about the positives. When your troll post is a response, it is very beneficial if you are the first response on the thread, since you can then set the route the discussion will take. A good example of this can be found here: http://www.theyeshivaworld.com/coffeeroom/topic/here-we-go-again-1

Also, I like how you very gently take all the air out of your target’s sails, by just simply and bluntly stating that her object is unattainable.

So all in all, I’d say this is an excellent first attempt; you should be proud of yourself.

Now let’s discuss how to make it even better than it already is.

It isn’t immediately clear what you mean when you say it is “too late.” Perhaps you mean that it is too late for anyone to post any troll posts for them to be critiqued, but you don’t explain why that would be so.

So, this is a good path, and I’d like you to keep on the same idea. See how you can make it clearer what you mean. I look forward to reviewing your edits.