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On A Hopeful Note
Are you really out there?
Can you really be?
Is there really someone
Laughs when I laugh
Cares when I cry
Notices how hard
Shuvi nafshi
Limnuchoychi .
Strong and tall
Content and secure
Cheerful and honest
With love that is pure
Loyal to him
A life shared is joyful
When souls SHINE within.
I can manage alone
My kids and my home
Doing things on my own
Hashem is so with me
His love is rock-solid
If not for His strength
I’d have no “samech-daled”!
At times I do wish
For that miracle dream
But ONLY if it will
Bring joy, as a team.
The right one, the right time
And if not – I accept it
This script’s up in heaven;
I don’t need to direct it.
Eclipse
You seriously have talent. I think you should start writing (and get paid for it) for a frum publication if you are so inclined and have the time. I’m sure your articles and poems would be a hit.
Beautiful. It has a Shir haShirim feel to it (the first part at least). May you be zoche to meet your one and only soon!
eclipse your poem is BEAUTIFUL. absolutely stunning. i once wrote something on a similar note. i started writing it at 19 and finished it when i was about 22. it kept me strong for 8 years (got married at 27). i read it nearly everyday and every night before i went to sleep. and everytime a shidduch went bad and i got hurt, i read it. i kept a copy in my siddur by shmoneh esray to remind me to daven harder. it kept me hopeful that there is that light at the end of the tunnel and my chosson was out there somewhere waiting for me. ill share with you mine. your gonna find your guy bezras Hashem very soon!
Dearest future chosson,
Where ever you may be
I am waiting for you so eagerly
Just so I can finally say
You are special to me in every way
Your neshama shines and sparkles so bright
From it emanates a radiant light
Materialism to you is no issue
Just to be rich in torah and mitzvos too
Flowing through your veins is a sweetness I cant explain
A love for learning and growing to sanctify Hashem’s name
A cheerful and pleasent demeanor, an optimistic mind
When tough times develop the stregnth of bitachon you simply find
With joy and pleasure you help others so selflessly
Bringing nachas to Hashem and to your family
With all your words and actions the Shechina rests
In all your sorrows and in all your tests
The boy you are is the girl I aspire to be
Because you are you is the reason I am me
In order that I can be zoche for you
I must myself up to what you do
It is what I have strived for these last few years
It took alot of courage and alot of tears.
I share with you a piece of my true essence
For its because of you my growing has such persistance
Its in your zechus for all the torah I learn and mitzvos I do
There are no words that can sufficiently thank you
We are so close yet so very far apart
I can feel you inside me with every beat of my heart
I am yours and you are mine
Together our souls rightfully intertwine
Two hearts, minds, and bodies to unite as one
There’s so much to accomplish and it hasnt yet begun
Eventhough we’ve never met there’s still so much to say
I cant express how greatly I anticapate that day
You are a priceless gift, my very own precious treasure
Thinking of you gives me endless amounts of pleasure
My dear chosson, oh how I wish you could know
That you make so happy and give me such glow
B’ezras Hashem I will make you feel the same way
It is what I do daven for every single day
Without you I am not complete
But I will become whole the day we meet
To stand with you under the chupa in perfect harmony is sheer bliss
Devoting our lives to each other to build a bayis
You are the only one my heart longs for
With each passing day I love you more and more
My love for you is for all eternity
As we grow together in divine spirituality
My beloved chosson, know that every word of this is true
And it written and dedicated only to you
Always remember how special you are to me
From the depths of my heart…
Your future kallah,
mercury
These poems are beautiful, and as a single man who seeks his basherta, and has experienced much pain and sadness and heartbreak along the way, I can definitely relate to these sentiments.
May HaShem our G-d bless all of you with simcha, with shalom, and with a sweet year, and may He lead you to your soulmates in His timing, speedily in our days.
*Love*
+1!
well eclipse, i didnt quite marry the guy in the poem. far from it actually. nor did i become that girl i said i was gonna be. i expected alot when i was younger. i had so much expectations of the guy i wanted and the person i wanted to be and then life happens.i realized that poem takes a lifetime. so hopefully after 120 i can look back and say to my kids and grandkids it all came true. for now…theres lots of work. and marriage isnt all that lovey dovey fluffy stuff. true love takes time. we both have alot of learning and growing to do. but still in my time of loneliness it kept me strong and i am thankful Hashem gave me the wisdom and emotions to write it up.
I defend your honor. You’re the only Human around here
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