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    I just want a good cry

    with a friend who’ll sit and won’t ask why

    I wish all of this made sense to me

    I wish I understood, HaShem’s vision I’d see

    But I can’t, I can only hold on

    While humming and writing on my way some new songs

    Only Hashem can help me, that I know

    My friends can make sure I ‘m not alone

    I’m so confused and befuddled

    Inside I’m a little girl who wants her mother to come and cuddle

    And tell her it’s gonna be alright

    and that she’ll become stronger from this fight

    inside is that girl that’s terrified

    from all the rules the adults defy

    On the outisde, I’m a big girl that needs a break

    to comfort that little girl inside who claims this is all just a big mistake

    “this only happens to big girls!!!” She protests

    ‘But if Hashem is giving this to me, I can’t be that little I confess’

    if Hashem believes in me

    I’d be stupid not to see

    that I can do this!!!! With a smile, not a sigh

    but maybe after a nice good cry….

    #1015576
    sm29
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    crying can be very cleansing, before we pick our self up and go forward. I’ve had those times when things were very difficult. I hope you feel better.

    #1015577
    pixelate
    Member

    nice poem.

    #1015578
    Bookworm120
    Participant

    Lovely poem. 🙂

    #1015579
    oomis
    Participant

    yasher koach!

    #1015580

    Very nice, and welcome back. Haven’t seen you around here lately. Good sign!!

    #1015581
    HaLeiVi
    Participant

    I’m not asking why.

    #1015582

    Thanks, Iv’e been busy….

    Hopefully I’ll get tthat good cry, but everyone is pushing things so fast there dosen’t seem to be time for it or any friend who understands that is what I need right now…

    But I know HaShem is with me, and he’ll give me time soon for one…

    Iv’e missed you guyz too!!!!

    #1015583
    oomis
    Participant

    Sometimes we really DO need a good, cleansing cry. It can be very cathartic and does help. The worst thing that happened to someone I care about, when she had a miscarriage, was that everytime she would begin to tear up, someone would tell her not to cry. When she was with me, I just let her vent her emotions, and it was good for her.

    #1015584
    the-art-of-moi
    Participant

    xoxo, Shopping.

    Stay strong!

    #1015585

    Thanks…B”H I did it!!!! On the cheshbon or 3 classes, but I did it.

    Miss you around TAOM…

    xoxoxo, you too

    #1015586
    the-art-of-moi
    Participant

    I’m so impressed!

    🙂

    #1015587

    #Crying isn’t a sign of weakness, since birth it has always been a sign that we are alive.

    #1015588
    👑RebYidd23
    Participant

    Are the majority of people dead most of the time?

    #1015589

    Iv’e heard that one before…I’d post some follow up poems but, poetry comes from my soul, and recently my soul is expressing itself in hebrew….sorry

    #1015590
    the-art-of-moi
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    Hey Shopping,

    This sounds really weird when I actually type it out, but what language do you think in? Is it still English, or has it changed to Hebrew?

    Really random, but I’ve always wondered… 🙂

    #1015591
    I. M. Shluffin
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    People generally think in and dream in their first language. I know at least one exception. Her first language was Yiddish, then Hebrew, and finally English. Now she doesn’t remember much Yiddish, and she thinks and dreams in English.

    #1015592

    Ussually english, my hebrew is too slow, when I try to think in it my thoughts go really slow and it annoys me…and somehow it turns to english…

    When I converse in hebrew I think of what I want to say in hebrew, if I try to translate, it will come out all wrong and get me mixed up, and the style of the language is SO different…like there’s no OMG or LOL in hebrew…and no word for like, meanwhile hebrew has worlds like, davka, and yalla, and die…that sound weird in english….

    I dream in amix, sometime one or the other and sometimes both….

    I have a friend who speaks english, yiddish, and hebrew…I’ll ask her…

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