May 8, 2011 8:21 pm at 8:21 pm #596754
Hi,anyone wanna pretend they’re interested?
It doesn’t cost me,or you,or the Mods….
Constructive critique welcome.Just say it nicely!:)
THE ME I’LL ONE DAY BE
I admire people who think before they speak
I admire people who speak calmly ALL the time
I admire people who say everything in the nicest way possible
I admire people who direct and lead with pleasant courtesy
I admire people who are a combination of the good in me
And…what I wish to be.
I do put thought into my words
But sometimes my feelings are too visible
I do try to watch my tone
But sometimes my feelings are too audible
I believe in using ONLY refined speech
But mockery and mistreatment have evoked in me
That which I yearn to erase
I have accomplished
But I strive to accomplish more
I can’t wait to be…
THE ME I’LL ONE DAY BE.May 8, 2011 11:16 pm at 11:16 pm #765176BSDMember
Beautiful!!! Thank you!
I hope to also one day be the you you will one day be:)May 8, 2011 11:35 pm at 11:35 pm #765177
BSD:That’s cute!:)May 8, 2011 11:50 pm at 11:50 pm #765178
Here’s “Yiddishe Kinder” translated into English.(sung by males,of course) Hope you like it. No musical instruments.
Ok,how do I do this? It’s in a compressed file.May 9, 2011 12:30 am at 12:30 am #765179bombmaniacParticipant
Just be aware of the fact that once you post your poems here you give up your rights to them…May 9, 2011 12:44 am at 12:44 am #765180ShrekMember
wow.May 9, 2011 12:50 am at 12:50 am #765181
Problem is I can’t put my name.I don’t mind if someone uses it,so long as they don’t pretend they made it up.(I’ve had that)May 9, 2011 12:52 am at 12:52 am #765182GumBallMember
Can I Publish My Poems Here??-No!! lolMay 9, 2011 1:30 am at 1:30 am #765183
I waste half my life trying to figure out computer stuff my older kids know automatically.How do I get a compressed file into a “post”? Or any article? I can’t copy and paste it here for the life of me.
A lot of “life” expressions,I know.[What do you want from my life?:)]May 9, 2011 1:32 am at 1:32 am #765184
Ok,it’s probably not basherte.
Good night,everyone.May 9, 2011 2:11 am at 2:11 am #765185BSDMember
A certain gadol(can’t remember who) once said”I don’t mind if ppl say over my divrei torah in their name. I mind when ppl say over their divrei torah in my name.May 9, 2011 2:19 am at 2:19 am #765186
Very good!:)May 9, 2011 2:32 am at 2:32 am #765187YW Moderator-42Moderator
right-click the file and choose to “extract” it. This will make a new file that you can hopefully open and then copy and paste from.May 9, 2011 3:22 am at 3:22 am #765188
I tried…thanks anyway.I’m going to sleep EARLY tonight as you can see!May 9, 2011 3:23 am at 3:23 am #765189
Guess Hashem wins.
That’s it for this thread!
I know when I’m beat:)May 9, 2011 1:54 pm at 1:54 pm #765190hanibParticipant
I hope to also one day be the you you will one day be:)
me2 🙂May 9, 2011 3:41 pm at 3:41 pm #765191ZeesKiteParticipant
I find it a BIG ma’alo of posting (here in CR) rather then talking – I can think out & consider each and every word carefully. A lot of times I would write out a long ‘megilla’ ready to post, and decide to delete it at the last minute after careful deliberation. Whereas the mouth is a rapid-fire apparatus, the pen (or keyboard) is a s-l-o-w moving vehicle. Editable & deletable too. I consider this a big benefit of CR-ing, learning to talk with more ‘edelkeit’.
My thanks go to all who inspired me..May 9, 2011 6:35 pm at 6:35 pm #765192am yisrael chaiParticipant
“Hi,anyone wanna pretend they’re interested?”
Eclipse, we don’t have to pretend; we are sincerely interested.
that was really good
yup, that’s what the machsom l’phee is all about.
hacayi v’hamaves bidai halashonMay 9, 2011 8:28 pm at 8:28 pm #765193adorableParticipant
eclipse- your poems are great! Love that one about being you… its amazing! Keep it up! If someone does not want to read it they dont have to
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