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Wake up in the morning on the floor
Chuck the bottles-ur out the door
Tuck your shirt in on the way
Hope to make it through the day
Modeh ani- Brachos- time to pray
Mishnah berurah to learn the way
Breakfast for about an hour
Time for coffee, nap,n shower
Show up to seder ten minutes late
Plus a twenty minute break
Now youre ready to shteig to the moon
Counting down till shiur at noon
Rocking up the back and forth
Pretend your holding “uhuh of course”
Finally the best time of all
Lunch is here lets play some ball
Cheat and lie to win the game
Anything to keep your reign
I cant lose it will be a busha
Show up to mincha by kedusha
Mussur time to work on gadlus
Put your head down “hispalelus”
Coffee breaks a real upper
For energy to shmuz til supper
Supper is about 6-8
2 hours left were doin great
Finish up the life-altering convo from heart
Maariv-NOW your day can start
Hit the courts, hit the store
Play some music, rap some more
Call your friends, Night comes to an end
Passout and start again.
Post your own!!
Lol but no lol!
wow that is amazing did you think of that yourself dovv?
Ke$ha hehe
What are you trying to say, that there are people in yeshiva who are imperfect, and some who even don’t belong there. Is that something you just figured out? Mazel tov.
I wonder why you think it is appropriate to make fun of them like this. Is that how you deal with all issues, by making fun of them? Why don’t you write a song mocking people who have emotional issues? Or maybe a song mocking people who are OTD.
I know; a song about divorcees. After all, in most divorces, you could probably identify at least a few things each person did wrong, or bad choices made.
Notice how the villain in your song only comes ten minutes late to seder. He pretends to understand his chavrusa, which means he cares to be thought of as understanding, yet despite sitting with the chavrusa all morning, he does not understand. You have only mockery.
For you, I have only pity.
Nebach, What a sad life you have – nothing that you do, are you doing right. Why do we all have to know? Sounds like your proud about it.
Why can’t people take some humor in their life?
Backinaction
If this song is a depiction of your life it deeply saddens me.
Why can’t people take some humor in their life?
Agreed smartcookie.
backinaction- very cute poem, i like your rhymes (you can head over to the limerick thread if you like…lol)
smartcookie – Humor is only when its funny.
Brisker- this is very funny. The poster isn’t naming anyone specific. If someone feels offended then maybe they can relate to it too much…
backinaction: Great song! Can I forward it?
I’m shocked that you guys want to forward this. Don’t get me wrong, the fellow who wrote this has rhyming skills and talent, but the content of the song is pathetic and definitely not something to “sing” about!
Would you sing a song “I am a loser I am a failure…?” I hope not.
That’s why the OP doesn’t identify himself. He doesn’t want anyone to think that he’s talking about himself.
In which case the OP is much worse, if he is making chozek of others.
As long as he’s not making obvious specification as to whom he’s talking about, he’s not ridiculing anyone.
That’s baloney. You can’t make chozek of Yeshiva bochorim or whatever, under the guise of “it isn’t anyone specific”.
As long as he’s not making obvious specification as to whom he’s talking about, he’s not ridiculing anyone.
Really? How do you figure?
smartcookie – Its the mussig of the song that is sad. Yes nebach there are people like this and no it is not something we like advertising. Maybe make a positive sounding song, why look negative?
Backinaction:
Did you make up the song like the title of the thread says,or was it someone else?
According to Google, this is the only webpage on the internet with this song.
Backinaction
I see you have talent. Can you possible make up a song with a more positive message?
i actually made this song up…sorry to those that hav problems with it.
b”h im learning well in yesheva and dont have the problems i rhymed about.. but an outlet of mine is texting ‘rap’s out to my friends..this one was a joke just to make em laugh… hope u enjoy-i hav some beter ones
Ya ur shteigin in yeshiva day n nite
But the yetzer hara’s puttin up a serious fite
So u hav ur ups and u hav ur downs
U got ur smiles n u got ur frowns
The ikur is to realize this happens to all
Don’t think that ur the only one to lose and fall
Gota just keep pushin – get up off the floor
Ha’olam hazeh domeh l’fruzdor
Evry sigle actions gota be towards that goal
Day after day gota be m’kabel the Ol-
Malchus shomayim-try to pass evry test
And realize hashem does evrything for the Best!
DOVV keep them coming
backinaction
Member
“I did. why do u ask?”
Dovv
from the Left Coast
“i actually made this song up…sorry to those that hav problems with it.”
I’m confused. Did backinaction or dovv make this up? or do u have two screen names?
WIY – I agree, he should make up a nice song in place of this.
I guess backinaction is Dovv. Sorry about your obvious mistake. Next time take more caution.
good shtik backinaction but clearly abbazaba knew i rote it
“wow that is amazing did you think of that yourself dovv?”
anywayz thank u all for coming ur support has really meant alot..
and popabaraba thx for ur support;-)
Ok DovvPlease stop. This really looks stupid.
Methinks abbazabba is also one of him.
abbazabba , backinaction , Dovv – something gives me a feeling that 2 (possibily 3) of the above screen names is 1 person…
lol nah im dovv and only dovv and i made the songs… abbazaba and backinaction are my friends
Dovv and Backinaction:
I have a feeling you’re the same person, but if you really are two friends, can you perhaps have your conversations face to face?
We usually discuss topics here that are of interest to us all!
Mods
Please shut this thread down and if necessary deal with Dovv and Backinaction and abbazaba who are likely the same person. We dont need this here.
I agree–just talk in front of the mirror.
Based on my research abbazabba and Dovv are definitely 2 separate people. Dovv wrote the song. backinaction seems to be abbazabba taking credit for his friend’s song. Let’s get back on topic and comment on the song rather than who is the author.
“backinaction seems to be abbazabba taking credit for his friend’s song.”
Then why did abbazabba compliment Dovv on the song, when Dovv hadn’t even posted yet on this thread?
Mod 42
Thanks for looking into it, however they seem like young teens and they are acting like children. All I ask is that you moderate their behavior so this place doesn’t become a kindergarten.
I like Dovv.
The Motzei shabos hack
wher to go wher 2 rock
Wat to do wat to see
Dropin coin-flyin free
From miami 2 LA
2 dallas to ZA
From milwakee to the Qween
Wata scene kno wat I mean??
Fleishix-pizza, playin ball?
Indoor outdoor wats the call
Ideas bouncin off the walls
But in the end it all just falls
Knokin down the list 1by1
Wat not to do wat won’t be fun
& the nite wastes into lines n rhymes
But the hack itself creates good times
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