Rosh Hashana Poem

Home Forums Decaffeinated Coffee Rosh Hashana Poem


Viewing 9 posts - 1 through 9 (of 9 total)
  • Author
  • #613758
    Shopping613 🌠

    Oh Hashem give me strength

    Where have I gone?

    The Yetzer Hara is laughing

    But I won’t chuckle along

    Oh Hashem I try

    they say you are in the field

    if so please tell me

    why won’t he yield?

    Oh Hashem all Rosh Hashana

    I tried to pray

    but this annoying Yetzer Hara

    Why, he wanted to PLAY!!!

    Oh Hashem what he did…

    he stuck his tongue in my face

    put thoughts in my mind

    with no stop or trace

    Oh Hashem is our 10 days

    I keep failing, please let him leave me BE!!!

    This nasty little fellow,

    should NOT be free!

    Oh Hashem I never had such difficulty

    for me, with you to talk

    I’ve never had to try and push away,

    so many thoughts!

    So Hashem, PLEASE!!!!

    Take this monster away!!!!!!

    I have 6 more days left to try again.

    Tell me, how will I pray?????


    ” Oh Hashem is our 10 days

    I keep failing, please let him leave

    me BE!!!”

    I know how you feel.

    Well written!

    Somehow we will overcome him! (but don’t ask me how!)

    Letakein Girl

    Awesome as ever, Shopping.


    Ditto! Very well-written. 🙂


    Great poem 🙂

    It’s hard, but every effort counts. We don’t need to be perfect, just keep moving forward.

    yaakov doe

    Well written, but why “him” – not “her”?


    It sounds a bit like Country Yossi’s song:

    “Yetzer hara you’re a real mean guy,

    You drive me crazy and I’ll tell you why,

    You’re alwayss makin’ me do things no good,

    You never let me do the things I should….

    Oy vey, set me free,

    Yetzer hara, stop pickin’ on me” 🙂

    Cute poem shopping613! Are you planning on being a writer someday?



    You’re really inspiring me

    When the monster lets you be

    Tell him to set me, too, free

    And when you pray

    These holy next five day(s)

    For me, too, give a little sway

    To send my sins away

    And blessings our way :):):)


    eb – cute 🙂 amein yes me too!

Viewing 9 posts - 1 through 9 (of 9 total)
  • You must be logged in to reply to this topic.