Eli Bolevnik

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    Eli Bolevnik

    Dear Y&P & Daas Yachid,

    Please read my words

    On this wonderful site

    Cause someone named Dad

    Taught me how to write

    Week in and week out

    “Bolevnik” muses

    You, I, and him

    He surely amuses

    Frankly he’s too busy

    To read our hock

    He has so much to write

    And not much time on the clock

    However, I informed him

    About your little work

    He chuckled and laugh

    And left off with a smirk

    You see, every week

    His poem gets read

    Then dozens of Hockers

    Critique what he said

    Indeed, listen up

    And then you will see

    That imitation sure is

    The greatest form of flattery

    Yes you do have a right

    To write your own work

    But please do not act

    Like a glorified jerk

    Do not come to tears

    When “Bolevnik” mis-rhymes

    ‘Cause though he’s been writing for years

    He’s been wrong VERY few times!

    And you can call the Yated

    Say “Bolevnik is Sloppy”

    But remember that your FJJ

    Of the Yated, its one big Copy!

    I think perhaps your question

    Should be sent to the Rountable

    Maybe the Purim edition

    Will make it more Stable

    “Can I copy what

    A great writer writes,

    And mock it online,

    Will it create fights?”

    And all the Rabbanim will answer

    “No way! Go back to bed.”

    But Rabbi Kamenetzky will answer

    “Sure! Go right Ahead!”

    I hope I cleared up

    Everything here

    And you got your answer

    That “Bolevnik” doesn’t care

    About what you say

    What you write or you Blog

    He is way too busy

    So you can go take a jog

    He has many jobs

    And things to do

    But one is definitely not responding

    To people like you!

    So instead of him writing back

    I wrote back in lieu

    Do not critisize this poem

    Or go on a Rage

    ‘Cause this one was writen

    By someone less than half your age

    True, I’m bored enough

    To read this Hock

    And I read your poem

    Which put me in Shock

    Thats why I wrote

    This little “Muse”

    To inform everyone

    That might be confused

    This poem is not

    In defense of “Bolevnik’s”

    He does not need that

    He’ll write what he picks

    I hope your still reading

    ‘Cause this is the end

    Of my very long poem

    To which “Bolevnik” I’ll send!

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