Reply To: ATT POETRY PEOPLE

Home Forums Decaffeinated Coffee ATT POETRY PEOPLE Reply To: ATT POETRY PEOPLE

#1168598
shnitzy
Member

her heart

shadowy green meadows

forbidden pastures

closely secured and guarded

no intruders are welcome

surrounded by

towering walls of stone

bars of iron

locks of steel

bricks upon bricks

so solid

and closed

even insects

are forbidden entry

days

months

years

beautiful green fields

lush gardens

closed away

beneath

cloudy skies

without even a

ray of sunshine

countless attempt

to penetrate the fortress

and breathe their last

outside it’s gates

dawn

one tiny spider

approaches

hailing from

pastures as beautiful

beyond a fortress

as unapproachable

as her own

first attempts

yield nothing

soon

spider changes tactics

digs beneath the

wall of stone

slowly

strenuously

days

months

spider breaks through

the fine soil

scales the fortress

from within

weaving

gossamer threads of trust

time

strengthening

her Web of beauty

unbreakable wall

crumbling to dust

Luna- wow! that poem was totally up my alley….now if only I could write so well…sigh

icot-thanx that was really meaningful…I was close to the kedoshim…