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  • #1168718
    Luna Lovegood
    Participant

    Tell me it will be okay

    Tell me you’ll never go away

    Say you’ll stay by my side

    Even through the changing tide

    The moon will push

    The moon will pull

    Life may sometimes seem half full

    But promise you will never leave

    Promise that you’ll never deceive

    Say you will always stay true

    Because I really need you

    Promise you will hold my hand in the dark of night

    Promise you will be my bright and guiding light

    Even though the storms and wind try to pull me down

    In the swirling sea of life do not let me drown

    Promise to stay with me forever

    Promise our bond will never be severed

    #1168722
    aproudbyg
    Participant

    Luna,i really love it

    #1168723

    Bump guys.

    I don’t think I ever posted some of my poetry here….I think it has been posted anywhere BUT the CR.

    I was writing this for the Lipa contest put I didn’t make the deadline ๐Ÿ™ Here it is:

    from the battle

    I’m just so weary

    here’s a paper

    on it got all my dreams

    how I wanted to be right

    how I wanted to win this fight

    how I wanted to uphold hashem’s glory

    I’m dreaming again

    It’s a “what if” game

    how should I live

    things that I can’t explain

    When the lights go out at night

    I’m left alone with the monsters I fight

    and I feel so weak, lost, and lonely

    CHORUS:

    you take my hand and show me in an instant

    how it is that I’m a daughter to you

    and what it means to be a jew

    and you take me hand and banish the distance

    it’s now so vivid and clear

    that I’m standing right next to you

    I close my eyes

    wishing it would all melt away

    keeping only the good

    that from the battle I have gained

    push it all into his arms

    and i know he wont be alarmed

    as I turn my back, walking away calmly

    Foot after foot

    I keep walking

    I get up again and again

    and I keep singing

    I’ll yell out hashem’s name

    I just want to connect

    and burn the distance away

    CHORUS:

    you take my hand and show me in an instant

    how it is that I’m a daughter to you

    and what it means to be a jew

    and you take me hand and banish the distance

    it’s now so vivid and clear

    that I’m standing right next to you

    If “if” is what you wanted

    it would be reality

    the only thing that in exsistense

    is me

    CHORUS:

    you take my hand and show me in an instant

    how it is that I’m a daughter to you

    and what it means to be a jew

    and you take me hand and banish the distance

    it’s now so vivid and clear

    that I’m standing right next to you

    #1168724

    Wow wow wow #speechless

    #1168725

    Thanks. It’s a shame I didn’t make the deadline….

    What can I do? One day bezrat Hashem I hope it can be in a real CD

    #1168726
    kapusta
    Participant

    Great job, Shopping!

    #1168727

    Thanks, I haven’t seen you around in a while!

    #1168728
    kapusta
    Participant

    Still here, maybe a little quieter though ๐Ÿ™‚

    Just curious, this thread was pretty popular a while back. I know a couple of us are still on here, but are there any other posters in hiding? We’d love to hear from you.

    #1168729

    I guess poetry isn’t very popular in the new generation. Shame on you!

    #1168730
    I. M. Shluffin
    Participant

    Today when I opened my browser,

    I looked at which new posts were placed

    In the kosher coffee room groupthink,

    To see how much time I could waste.

    Minute by minute, the new words were written

    Dating and politics, spider advice,

    The topics so typically askew.

    Being able to read into the minds

    Of anonymous Jews in the velt,

    I felt so connected; I hope you can see

    That this poem is really heartfelt.

    I love reading diverse opinions

    All under the umbrella of Torah,

    How cool that I have an opinion

    That so many people will blame?

    When someone else quotes you by name.

    When only my pseudo gets noticed.

    And it bothers me not the remotest.

    I think that the CR creation

    Is unique as a tortoiseshell rat.

    I vote that it stays on until end of time

    #1168731
    kapusta
    Participant

    Shopping, I’m not that great at poetry myself, I was referring more to the posters themselves than the actual poetry. But I’d be happy to read some too!

    I.M, I like those observations.

    #1168732

    I was referring to the posters in general lol, not you.

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