Thank you Saysme, for your comment.

this account is set up for a kid (pre bar or bas mitzva) who’s interested in writing poems. it will be used for this thread only. all posts will be done with parental supervision.

I entered a room quite fine

where everything was perfect

and if you were upset

that they would detect

Bubbles fell from the sky

and wonderfully scented the room

smiles invaded the place

there wasn’t an inch of gloom

You want a snack, it comes right away

and you’re eating in no time

not to take advantage of it

would seem to be a crime

Babies’ giggles filled the room

it was a wondrous sound

and after enjoying it

you would be crowned

And afterward, when they were done

finished with pampering you

you’d wake up in bed and then say

I knew it was too good to be true!